Whoa. I loved reading this. I can’t wait to read Part 2. Your descriptions are excellent. I could see you hanging up the phone, seeing the girl, plugging in the electric, and finally seeing the man. The interactions between you and the girl were sweet, sassy, and humorous. How you describe things. The words you choose. Brilliant. Thank you for sharing.
The descriptions of people, places, and events are so vivid! I'm right there with you, frozen as I wait to see what happens with this red-faced, gun-toting guy.
Whoa. I loved reading this. I can’t wait to read Part 2. Your descriptions are excellent. I could see you hanging up the phone, seeing the girl, plugging in the electric, and finally seeing the man. The interactions between you and the girl were sweet, sassy, and humorous. How you describe things. The words you choose. Brilliant. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, Keri!! I am so thrilled to have found your work here!!
A bully with a gun frightening a small child and a young female. Sounds like the Virginia I remember, sadly.
Heartbreaking, yes. More soon, really happy you’re here.
O.M.G.
The descriptions of people, places, and events are so vivid! I'm right there with you, frozen as I wait to see what happens with this red-faced, gun-toting guy.
Sarah, thank you. What a pleasure to see you here. 💜
Oh my god.
I owe you texts!! Hugs, be back to you soon as I can!
Why did this little girl remind me of Kate?
Kate is younger and softer. This lil one…she was something otherworldly. See you later this week!!
Outstanding
Thank you, AT!! I am over the moon that you’re here 🥰
As soon as I get caught up I’ll pass the phone to Unkl Rogere so he can enjoy reading about your experiences as well.
Yeah... I know the sound. This was a real cliff-hanger.
Sorry I left you hanging an extra week!!! Brb with that… 😳💙
Such. Wonderful. Writing!!!! I love it. Can’t wait for part 2.
Susan, thank you! Next part this Friday, I really look forward to hearing your thoughts. ☺️
Next part coming up…it is hard, and it is detailed, and I am so glad you’re with me on the journey 💜